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Impress the college admissions officer with your child's personal statement!

Experienced, Ivy-League educated editors to improve your child's spelling, grammar and overall message

Make Your Personal Essay Stand Out From the Crowd

  • Getting admitted to an elite college is getting more competitive every year. As a result more applicants are applying with strong SAT scores and grades.
  • This makes it far more challenging for the applicant to get noticed. The personal statement is a great way to highlight what is unique about your child.
  • In many cases the personal statement is the deciding factor on which student should be offered admission.

How It Works

  • 1. Meeting with your editor:
    Meeting in person, or via Skype to help you come up with an exceptional essay topic that explains why your child is unique.
  • 2. Editor provides you with personalized feedback:
    You provide us your initial draft. Your editor looks to comment on the following issues.
    •Grammar •Spelling •Sentence structure •Word choice •Suggestions on how to improve your personal statement.
  • 3. Review your revised personal statement:
    If you have any questions or concerns your editor will be available to you to help you.
  • "Your editor did an exceptional job on my daughter's personal statement. This was money well spent. I can highly recommend College Mentoring for any student that needs help with their personal statement."

    • Olivia T. Columbus, OH

Set yourself apart from the rest with a stellar essay

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Our editors can help your child have a personal statement that stands out from the crowd.

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We Help you Polish Your Personal Statement to Shine

Meet the editors

Adnan I.

Formerly at Admission Committees of:
Johns Hopkins University
George Washington University
Georgetown Law School

Adnan has worked for three different admissions committees: Johns Hopkins University, Georgetown Law School (as a consultant) and George Washington University. He has coached countless students on college essays, admissions strategies, college selection, resumes, college applications, letters of recommendation, mock interviews, and financial aid. More recently, he was interviewed by CBS Senior Reporter Kimberly Suiters regarding the college essay and application process as an expert.

Over his twenty years in Washington, DC and New York, he has also worked for The White House Press Office, US Senate Finance and Judiciary Committees, Federal Reserve Bank of New York, OSCE (as Advisor to the Chief of Mission for the 2012 US presidential elections) and served as Chief Operating Officer of a bilateral development initiative inaugurated by former Secretary of State Hillary Clinton with General Colin Powell as Honorary Chair. Currently, he works with the US Department of State.

Olivia J.

She has graduated from Harvard College with a degree in Filmmaking and English Language and Literature. She has received Summa Cum Laude for her thesis film, which she wrote,directed and edited. She was a moderator and director of the Harvard National Model United Nations, HACIA Democracy and the Harvard Model Organization of American States; she has held multiple leadership positions within The Harvard Advocate (Harvard's prestigious literary magazine), and was actively involved in the Harvard Radcliffe Dramatic Club. She can provide insight into what an admissions board might be looking for as well as share her own observations about the admittance process, her experiences at Harvard and being a college student in general.

Felicity S.

She has graduated magna cum from Barnard College, Columbia University with a degree in English literature. She has lived and worked in New York City since graduation. In high school she graduated as one of the top five students in her class, was the secretary of her high school National Honor Society, and was a Presidential Scholar. She would love to work with you to develop a professional and unique statement that truly showcases you.

Liz D.

As an honors graduate of Harvard University (Bachelors of Liberal Arts in Humanities, 2000) Liz D. understands the demands of applying for a top-tier school. Behind the scenes knowledge can be so helpful in guiding students. Her postgraduate study (Master of Science in Publishing from New York University's School of Continuing and Professional Education, 2004) expands her educational prowess. This winning combination of Ivy League graduate and education professional allows for Liz to help students craft top college admission essays.

Chelsea G.

Her penchant for writing has enabled her to graduate with honors from New York University, and it has served her well throughout her 15 year career as an educator, curriculum writer and editor. She is particularly passionate about helping young people express themselves through their personal statements, because writing personal statements is an opportunity to practice self-reflection and celebrate what makes one truly special. High school can be a particularly challenging and overwhelming time for young people, so it is important to have support from experienced professionals who understand what makes an authentic, inspired personal statement that will stand out in the applicant pool.

Nevin S.

He graduated from Cornell University with a degree in Economics and have held a variety of jobs in the Media and Entertainment industry, including positions at NBC and Focus Features. He currently works as a freelance writer.

Josh M.

He graduated from Teachers College Columbia University, with a Master's degree in Psychology in Education. He did a lot of research writing for this program. He has applied to all Ivy League and top-tier colleges and universities, so he knows what they are seeking in candidates and what they might be looking for in essays.

Sarah S.

She has a genuine curiosity in people, to understand who they are and what they represent, allows her to shape their stories through clear and compelling communication. She holds a University of Southern California degree in Broadcast and Digital Journalism where she trained to dissect complex issues and present them in an intriguing manner. Sarah is motivated to bring her strong storytelling skills, impeccable grammar, and succinct writing to help you articulately communicate your story in your personal statement.

Lisa S.

She is a professional writer and editor with more than 75 publication credits and expertise in magazine journalism; she's also written and edited for non-profits and ad agencies. Her multi-industry writing background has broadened her knowledge base and has been beneficial to her as a personal statement essay coach and editor. She has successfully helped students at all levels craft compelling personal statements for more than 10 years. Students she's worked with have been accepted to top-tier universities, including Stanford, Harvard, University of Pennsylvania, NYU, and Berkeley. She is passionate about helping students get into the colleges and grad schools of their choices, which is so important in today's competitive climate.

Dawn L.

Former Admissions Positions Held: The Florida State University, Florida International University, Keiser University Dawn is currently a Program Manager for Talent Development at Cenlar FSB, specializing in career coaching and the recruitment of interns and recent college graduates.

Dan D.

He was a National Merit Scholar in high school (perfect score on the writing section of the SAT) and he scored a 770 out of 800 on the verbal reasoning portion of the GRE. He has flawless grammar, perfect spelling, and is an expert at crafting compelling and inspiring personal statements. Admissions officers sort through thousands of applications and field phone calls from thousands of students. Their main purpose is to encourage new students to enroll in the school that signs their paychecks. Students have no such stake in their school. They can offer you an honest critique of their college based entirely on personalized experience. Each of these experiences will provide unique insight into campus life. You can feel confident that you are making an informed decision when it comes time to apply.

James P.

He is a narrative designer in the game industry. He holds a MFA in Creative Writing (Integrated Media) from the California Institute of the Arts, as well as a BA in Cognitive & Brain Science and Philosophy from Tufts University.

Abigail G.

She graduated from Emerson College with a degree in Writing, Literature and Publishing and was a Teaching Assistant for a literature course at UMass Boston. She has plenty of writing experience to share and cannot wait to help you.

Annie L.

She holds a bachelor's degree in public relations from University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. She studied journalism with a minor in creative writing. She is a former student-athlete and All-American runner for the Tar Heels. Her four years at Carolina have blended into one sweet moment in time.

Shoshana M.

She is an alumnus of the University of Wisconsin-Madison. While in college from 2010-2014, she double majored in Sociology and Communication Arts. In addition, she spent time studying abroad at Imperial College in London. Today, she works as a young professional in the communications and marketing field.